First Love

Ok so honestly, I think this poem is better than the 3.5 rating it has so far so if others could check it out I'd appreciate more r/c/c's on it. Perhaps some comments as to why it deserves a low rating?

Also I have a bunch of not-rated poems I'd love to know what people think about them.

I'll read 2 for every 1 you comment on. :)

By the way First Love is the only poem of the "fun" kind that I've ever done and I think it's good for what kind it is. So if you're not into fun and airy kind of poetry check out something else of mine. But thanks ahead of time!

of course i'll check out yous. can you check out my latest poem The Kiss and any others you want. thanks.

I've done three of your poems, and I may do more. I couldn't do First Love, as the firewall at work keeps me from reading love poems =/

HAHA that's awesome. I've never heard of a firewall blocking such things before. ;)

I'll check out your stuff in a bit and comment :) Thanks a lot I appreciate the comments.

By the way thanks for pointing out the typo - fixed it!

Thanks for all the comments so far! Anyone else?