Love Title Contest!!!!

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    OMG I WANNA DO UNFAITHFUL! that was so creepy! i was lookin at posts and that song i was singing outloud and i saw it, it's a sign i tell u. anyway, ill do it in a little while. wow thats weird.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    Unfaithful

    Baby, I know exactly what you doing,
    When your "with the guys", who are you fooling?
    Don't think I don't know about her, because I do,
    Yet even though I know, I can't let go of you.

    I saw you two kissing, late at night in the park,
    I saw you two there, even if it was very dark.
    That nearly broke my heart, I was just walking my dog,
    You were a prince to me, but now just a lowly frog.

    How could you be unfaithful to me, after all I've done,
    You said you were going to marry me, and I would have your son.
    What happened to that? Now you go breaking my heart?
    Well, baby that's messed up, this is where we part.

    You can have her, she won't be as good as me,
    For I loved you so much, but this is the end baby.
    You broke my heart, hope she breaks yours,
    Hope she is a criminal and steals the stuff from your drawers.

    Have a nice life, that you could've had with me forever,
    But now it's too late, you and me don't belong together.
    So, see you never, I love you none,
    I hope you and your girlfriend have fun.

    ~*Who Cares?*~
    lol ok didnt need much time to reserve, anyway wow i love that song. i had to write two ! because i finished writing one, and then i was gunna copt and paste so id have a copy on my pc 2 save and i deleted it and had to write a new one-.-. anyway, hope this is ok.

  • *princess*of*no*where*
    18 years ago

    All out of chances
    (Love that was never pure)

    By:Princess

    50% of my brain is telling me to walk away.
    While the other 50 says to stay.
    1 side says I love you.
    While the other says i don't need you.

    You spoke nothing but lies.
    And now i sit here and cry.
    You said I made you happy.
    And that it would be.

    Just you and me,
    Living so carefree.
    But you cheated on me 1 to many times.
    You acted like it wasn't a crime.

    You thought it would be alright.
    That we wouldn't even fight.
    But then you see all my tears.
    And you start to see more clear.

    You whisper in my ear.
    That this was your worst fear.
    You beg me to stay.
    While i walk away.
    With tears falling down my face.

    You grab my hand.
    Try to make me understand.
    That it wont happen again.
    That you will be the perfect man.

    Who will do the things i like.
    Who will never start a fight.
    That you want it to be alright.
    Then you huge me real tight.

    And you get down on your knee.
    And you kept begging me not to leave.
    But you don't see.
    This time it wont work on me.

    I turn to you once more.
    And drop my ring on the floor.
    I whisper I cant take it anymore.
    Then I open the door.

    While I cry I say "You broke my heart.
    I'm finally ready to part.
    This time I'm leaving for sure.
    Now I realize our love was never pure.

    About 2 days old i hope thats ok!

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Can I reserve 'I Want You Back' ?

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Thanks Bri

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    ooh, can i please reserve : I Want You To Know

    thank youu!

  • moonriver
    18 years ago

    May i reserve the second one"You are the one"?Thanks!

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    CAn I reserve? ~Do you love me to?~

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    4]I Want You Back.

    What happened to us that went so terribly wrong?
    I remember the days that we used to be strong.
    No one and nothing could ever get in our way,
    And I'm confused about why we broke up today.

    I want you back, I need to have you here with me,
    I'm not gonna be apart of your memory.
    I want you back, Cause I just can't stand losing you,
    So tell me exactly what you want me to do.

    There's so many thoughts of you inside my mind,
    And I know that I should just leave them all behind.
    It's easier said than done, I know 'cause I've tried,
    Though I will be strong, You won't see the tears I've cried.

    Copyright © Natalie 2006

    {Hope that's okay.}

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Woo! Cool. ^_^ Cmon people =D

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    [{9}] ~*`Do you Love me to?`*~ [{9}]

    Do you love me to,
    After all that we've been through?
    I know i honestly can say
    that I love you.

    Could you ever say that,
    with anyone or at any place?
    Look me in my eyes
    and tell it to my face?

    You say it in your notes
    and as a message on my phone
    but when youre standing next to me
    are these three words unknown?

    I have no problem
    saying it in front of you.
    And since you cant say it to me
    are these feelings untrue?

    Late nights on the phone
    just as friends do.
    But I need to know
    if you love me to?

    You said we were
    the best of friends.
    That our love
    could never end.

    The memories we have
    are of lovers and friends.
    Of nights on the town
    and time we have spent.

    But now it's all changed
    we're no longer that close
    there's no love connection
    and im sure it shows.

    So i'll sit here alone
    loving you everyday
    but I now know, I love you
    are three words i'll never hear you say.

    (c) 2006 Bryce Dressler

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    wow this contest is goin fast ive had my contest goin like 3 days n only 5 ppl have enterd:( neway gr8 work every1 so far

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    Could I reserve My Mistake???

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    Can I do another one, or is there a limit? If so can I do I'm sorry I lied

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    nevermind , the way I would put it wouldnt fit into this category.

  • LovelyDivine
    18 years ago

    My Mistake

    Everything was going so right,
    Nothing would keep us apart.
    But it all ended in just one night,
    One night that broke my heart.

    I did something you couldn't take;
    something that stopped it all,
    something that made us stumble and fall.
    I'll admit it, I'm sorry; It was my mistake.

    Now I sit by myself, all alone,
    in this dark and empty home.
    Thinking about that we had,
    over and over keeps making me sad.

    It seems that nothing will be the same,
    The sorrow and guilt are too tough to tame.
    Someday I'll be strong and make it through,
    For now I'll sit and think of what I did to you.

    I did something you couldn't take;
    something that stopped it all,
    something that made us stumble and fall.
    I'll admit it, I'm sorry; It was my mistake.

    My eyes are now welling up with tears,
    For I'll be living my with my worst fear.
    Unable to talk, unable to hear your voice,
    Although I know I have no choice.

    It was too much for both of us to take;
    It was something that ended it all,
    something that made us stumble and fall.
    I'll admit it, I'm sorry; It was my mistake.

  • moonriver
    18 years ago

    You are the one

    You are the one
    I’ve been praying in front of Buddha for 500 years
    Finally I’m lucky enough to gain your acquaintance

    You are the one
    That greets me in such a special way
    Occupying my heart arbitrarily without my consent

    You are the one
    That touches me by your unique talent
    Inviting me to dance in the rhythm of poems

    You are the one
    That awakens my sensation for the world
    Warming my soul and brighten my days

    You are the one
    That has taken away my breath
    Rendering me lost in boundless yearnings

  • Sean Dohr
    18 years ago

    I'll post one from the 12th, I know it's older than you'd like, but it'll get the contest going...

    You can ask me to delete it if you'd like.

    ~I Need You~

    Empty space inside of me,
    a front that reads no vacancies,
    a lie that's read transparently,
    as if you couldn't see through me.

    I know it's time to let you be,
    but it all came on too suddenly,
    I'm not prepared to set you free,
    don't leave me on my knees.

    You were my own personal tease,
    brought arousal with much ease,
    but with your female tendencies,
    you aimed only to displease.

    Looking back at what I wrote, I see,
    that is wasn't you, but it was me,
    I went about things so awkwardly,
    and now I miss you terribly.

    Please, someday, come back to me...

    ~Sean Dohr~

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    1 1 1 1 1 more!

  • Jessica
    18 years ago

    hehe, sorry about that.. :) you can do it cause i kinda lost inspiration! lol.. thank you though, and sorry..!

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    I cant do #7 cause I already did another one, so i dunno why its reserved :p

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    how can ne1 do 7 if it says its reserved. the person said they coodnt do it yet u still have it as reserved, so like no1 will enter the last 1....

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    reserve me the last one! i am working on it right now!

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    I Want You to Know

    The morning light creeps in the window
    Bathing your body in the warm afterglow
    My eyes caress your stunning silhouette
    Your lovely figure still outlined in sweat

    My hand unrestrained moves to your hips
    So luscious and smooth, as are your lips
    A sweet smile plays across in your sleep
    Dreaming of a love you may one day keep

    Our hands collide and fingers intertwine
    A silent surrender of your heart and mine
    You are my only; this I want you to know
    I am yours forever, through high and low

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    ooooh is the contest finally over? lol

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    i hope the rating will not be biased since one of your friends is competing. i will trust your judgment. may the best poems win! hah ok

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    wait is your friend still not done?? I am getting impatient! darn..

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    ahh yes thank you

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    sweetness. cant wait. lol i'm losing track of which contests i've entered, i'll check back in this one later today

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    umm...

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    woot woot!

  • Daenerys Stormborn
    18 years ago

    well you can comment on any 5 of my featured poems, it is up to you! thanks!

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    Sweetness. I seem to be getting second a lot falling behind Who Cares. Lol its all good though, atleast i know Im doing something right.

    As for the awards can you please rrc
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

    *My Curse
    *Wasting My Time
    *Do you Love me too?
    *Rainy Night
    *Falling Away from Me
    *Mirror Mind
    and
    *A Final Prayer

    Thanks a ton.

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    :-O HOW DID I GET 1ST?! EVERY1 ELSE WAS BETTER! WOW! thnx so much! i dun care wat ones u do! thnx again. wow...

  • Wasted Fake Smiles
    18 years ago

    thnx so much:D

  • Moose
    18 years ago

    thnx a ton brianna

  • Natalie
    18 years ago

    Woo!