New Contest!

does it have to be written today or what?

yea how long do we have? lol and duz it have 2 b newly written

ok, well i thot i had an older one but i dun, neway ill do 1 2morro i g2g off the pc now, nitey nite:D

You should allow us to post old poetry!!!

I Messed up Big Time

How could I be so stupid, I thought you cared,
LIttle did I realize you didn't notice you stared.
Told you how I felt, now we don't talk,
Now you think that you I stalk.

If I'd kept my big mouth shut, like a good girl,
You and I could be friends among the busy world.
However since I didn't, now I lost a good friend,
Even though I never deamt of friendship would end.

I really love you, but if I never said a thing,
Our friendship wouldn't seem like some kind of fling.
It does though, since you found out my love,
Now you stay away at all costs beyong and above.

I messed up big, and now this is the price I pay,
For if I just shut up, we'd be hanging out today.
I know I ruin something, that could've been great,
All just because I wanted to go on a stupid date.

I'm sorry AJ, I know I said too much,
But yet I'd kill to get just a touch-
of friendship back from you, it's been a whole week,
Not a word spoken, since you will no longer speak.

I'm sorry that I love you, I'm sorry you found out,
If I wasn't so stupid, I wouldn't now have so much doubt.
I know I messed up big time, this I am aware,
Although I still love you, friendship is fair.

~ My Last Promise ~

If I had the chance
to give to you
just one more promise spoken,
It would be to never
speak another,
for fear to have it broken.

(It's not new persay, but I am new to this website, so hopefully that's ok.)

DM

Please Forgive Me For My Thoughtless Actions.

Please Forgive Me....

For Lying To Your Face..
For Going behind your back,
and For Leaving You in this place.

Please Forgive Me.

For Running Away From You
For Going With That Guy,
And For Denying it Was True.

Please Forgive Me..

For Ignoring Your Pitiful Cries,
For Walking Away from You
and For Leaving You To Die..

Please Forgive Me...

For Not Being What You Deserve.
For Decieving The One I Love.
And For Getting Up The nerve.

Please Forgive Me...

For Telling You The Facts
For Not Avoiding this Confrontation.
and For Not Covering up my Tracks..

Please Forgive Me.

For What I've Done To You.
For no Longer Denying it,
And For Telling You It's True

IDK. Random Spur Of the Moment Thing..

xLaurenx

***EDIT***

i wanna see the look on my b/fs face when he reads this.. haha. priceless...

Sellin' to the Devil

Here I wake upon my knees,
Starting to bleed,
Starting to plead.
My life is gone,
Dead and over,
Sitting in Hell,
Drunk and sober.
Wasting my life on guys and booze,
Here I sit,
Time to choose.
My soul is lost,
haunted and cold,
Growing dark,
Growing old.
Selling my soul to the one we fear,
My life flashes before me,
Too late; He's here......

.....I remember when I was alive,
My life before me and a heart to thrive.
I regret hurting myself and my life,
But most of all, letting the Devil into my mind......

Hope you like it.........

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I hope someone reads my poem, i think it's a bit weird but i hope you like it........

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I also hope that i wrote it right. Please reply and tell me that i wrote it alright :P

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Brianna, could you tell me if the poem i just submitted qualifies for your contest? lol. i'm not quite sure.=P

good! then here's mine

"Never Should Have"

I never should have gotten,
Behind the wheel that night,
I knew I really shouldn't,
I knew it was not right.

I never should have turned the key,
Or put my foot down on the pad,
I never should have run those lights,
God! I was being so like my dad.

I never should have turned the corner,
Onto my street so fast,
I never should have swerved so hard,
To avoid my neighbours cat.

I knew that it was wrong,
As soon as I left the bar,
I knew what could happen,
But the drive wasn't that far.

I thought no bad would come to pass,
I thought I'd make it safe,
I never thought I'd hurt someone,
That was not my fate.

I was no a big drinker,
I never got too drunk,
How could I be one of those.
Who had their cars wrapped around trunks?

Not to me, for sure not me,
I missed my neighbours cat,
I swerved back into the road,
And that was the end of that.

I made it safely to my home,
And turned into the drive,
Missed the break and pushed the gas,
As I looked into her eyes.

She saw the car, and she screamed,
And tried to jump out of the way,
I tried to stop, but it was too late,
I sat in the car and prayed.

Oh God, oh God, please, please no,
From this nightmare please let me wake,
This can't be happening, this can't be true,
She's too good for you to take!

I stumbled out of my front seat,
And went around to the front,
Knelt by my sister now laying there,
Cried through her chokes grunts.

I cried, and cried, and held her hand,
Eventually she no longer stirred,
My parents appeared, and held her close,
I retreated to the curb.

I never should have gotten,
Behind the wheel that night,
I knew I really shouldn't
I knew it was not right.

I didn't think it was far,
Apparently I was wrong,
I wish that I could take it back,
That my will could have been more strong,

I should have called a cab that night,
Or simply just walked home,
Instead I chose to drink and drive...
Now my little sister's gone.

how sad i wood again...lol

Of All the Times I Hated You

Pale stars splattered against the sky
As I lay upon the cold night grass
Alone to think of the times I cried
Letting all those sad moments pass

Of all the times I hated you
It was myself I resented more
Of all the things I had to do
I still had things in store

My stubborness caused you pain
My silence caused you tears
My cries drove you insane
No more could you stand to hear

My Darling Mother
Sorry I'm not the angel you want
Sorry if you wished you had another
I'm sorry if everyone always taunts

My dearest Father
Sorry if you have no pride for me
I'm sorry I've become your daughter
I just can't be what you want me to be

Of all the times I hate you
It was all directed at a thing
A thing I've kept for so long and true
That is I just want to be me

This is from the 12th. Is that okay?

~Looking Back~

Empty space inside of me,
a front that reads no vacancies,
a lie that's read transparently,
as if you couldn't see through me.

I know it's time to let you be,
but it all came on too suddenly,
I'm not prepared to set you free,
don't leave me on my knees.

You were my own personal tease,
brought arousal with much ease,
but with your female tendencies,
you aimed only to displease.

Looking back at what I wrote, I see,
that is wasn't you, but it was me,
I went about things so awkwardly,
and now I miss you terribly.

Please, someday, come back to me...

~Sean Dohr~

How many more 'til it ends? lol.???

xLaurenx

Can i submit another one too?

i like this contest....

xLaurenx

Combat

Tall tales of my past,
Fame and fortune delight,
Lost it in a fire,
Dancing in the night,

A dress of every colour,
Groomed by proffession,
Tall tales I guess,
This is my confession,

I fled, I cut and sinned,
Life has just begun,
Lies, deceit, betrayal,
You cant undo what's done,

I have not lied at all,
But I regret what I believed,
Clouding me with rain,
And hiding what you've concieved,

I bled to my words,
And said to stay together,
Bestest friends my words,
To stay with you forever.

Your not looking at me?
Are you mad?
How can I know what you feel?
Are you sad?
You need to talk to me
I need to know what you feel
Cuz right now I just can't deal
Is it something I said?
Is it something I did?
I need to know
What do I owe?
Help me out please?
I'm talking to you
But you won't say a word
This is absord
I love you
You should know
Even though its hard to show
To see you hurt
To see you cry
Just makes me wanna die
Talk to me
Tell me what you feel
This pain I want to seal
Here I am
I gave my all
But I guess I can't save your fall
Is this how we're going to end?
Now you are not my friend
How can this be fair?
I thought you would always be there
But I guess I was wrong
Cuz your no where in sight
This is something I cannot fight
I guess this is it
Are friendship is done
I just want you to know I had fun
Before I say goodbye
I just need to know why?

REGRETS

so many people have so many regrets
a failed exam
a stuffed up relationship
a stupid comment,
made without thinking
a bet on game
a rushed decision
a broken friendship
or a choice that hurt someone.

i have many regrets
but i do try and learn,
learn from mistakes
and try not to repeat
an error from the past.

but my biggest regret
largest by far.
is falling for you
cause i’m pathetically obsessed
hopelessly in love
and i can’t move on
it causes so much pain
and it’s a waste of my time
cause you don’t love me back.

Ally . . .

just a spur of the moment thing. . .not to great but anyway. . .

^ aw.. ally, i can so relate.. nice one!

woohoo 3rd thnx so much! i dun care wat ones u do. ne of my featured ones w/ not many comments. which is like all of em. lol. thnx again

Omg., crazy 1st.. i dont likethat i got the same as APoeticSoul's.. yours was amazing.. thats so sad.... -sigh-

i think i'd be happy with w/e i don really care.....

-sigh-

Thankies....

xLaurenx

=O awesome! the first contest I've entered, lol, i just found this discusion section =)

w00t w00t. lol, any of mine would be great, thanks lauren I thought yours was better then mine=P

thnx so much:D

OMG
wow thanks so much
made my day
xD

Thank you

wow thankyou so much :D congratulations everyone!!!!!!!!!!
LOve and Smiles
Ally