poems redone

i went through the comment that i have gotten for some of my poems. took them and used them as i re-did my poems. all but about 2 or 3 are redone. so if you could r/r/c on them i would appreciate it. good AND bad comments are welcome! i'll return the favor. if you do more than one, i'll make sure i do the same for you.

thank you
jamie

sounds good :)