Sean Allen's Comment Extravaganza!

Well, it's not THAT exciting. I have three new poems I'd like read, commented, and voted on. They are:

Faith (A Sedoka)
California (A Monchielle)
Raspberry Summers

You comment on however many you want, and I'll return the favor x2. I do my best to give realistic critiques (though if your poem is too good my comment will sound stupid).

Thanks ahead of time.

heh i've already read these i think but i'll go check again ;)

Well I just wrote one but I'm writing another one now. So I'll comment at least one of yours in a few minutes. My new one is, "St. Valentines"

done St. Valentines and

Melissa how many poems do I owe you?

I think I owe you actually. Who the heck cares, right? It's all about supporting the other team, isn't it? ;)

I read all 3, and they were joys to read :)

If you could read some of mine.
don't know which you have read,
and which you haven't.

Okay so far of Darien's I've done:

My Friend Summer
Ode to My Old Man
A Vacation in Paradise
Fall to the Sky
Home is Where the Heart Is
Broken Hearts and Relations

whew.

Alright, I have done Deaths Touch and Untitled

Ah, Elijah, it appears that I owe you 4 more poems. I will get on those shortly.

alright, 4 more done for elijah

hey can you read love that was never pure. and on that poem little dove on the part "I didnt go to school for a week. because all my tears made me to weak."
I change it to "I didnt go to schoold for a week. to upset to even think."
Is that better?

yeah, I think that is much better actually. I'll comment on more of your poems once I get home, I'm about to leave work.

okay, i've read
"love that was never pure"

MY1&Only

I had a heck of a time finding another poem I hadn't commented on, but I did it.

Okay Brianna, I've commented and rated on all of those

i commented on all of thoses and thorougly enjoed it.
any of mine would be great thanks, xxALLYxx

yep yep, I'm sorry for the late reply--

my weekends are busier than my weekdays, so I might not be capable of commenting until later later later tonight. I hope that isn't terribly inconvenient for the two of you.

Don't worry, it'll get done.

Hey bud. I commented on two of yours and you're really great =) whenever you have time to comment and rate some of mine it'd be appreciated. thanks a million.

Alright, getting ready to read the three poets that I haven't yet. Here we go.

hey Sean.. i've read all three.. and they're great.. well, i havnt written anything new since May, and i didnt read ur poems for the return, but since you'll be willing to do it, any of my newest or those that dont have that many votes would be much appreciated..i dunno which u have already read or have not.. u dont hv to do ur 6, just watever u can..

thanks in advance
take care
NannO

I'll do all three can you read my these two and give a suggestion for the title of the one that doesn't have a title (if that makes sense)
Fall to pieces
I'm Not Sure Of A Title Yet

please be brutally honest!

Pip xxx

Oh... I'll be brutally honest alright

>:-D

okay, I'm done with invisible2u, let's keep this rolling.

Have you got any new ones? Cause I've done all the ones you want done. Lol..

I commented on your new one. Hope you don't mind.

No I don't mind Binks, and natalie, I have a new haiku... and I'm semi-working on a poem, but I probably won't have a new one until the weekdays roll around, I'm actually busier on the weekends.

Oh ok then. Well, I'll do the haiku in the morning and then your other one when you post it. Cause I'll prob post another song soonish, Tomorrow or something. I dunno yet. I might not post it. But I'll do your two new ones anyway.

You know Natalie, you could just PM me and ask me to comment on your poem for free, and I'd do it...

there you go! :) wonderful poemss! any of my latest please? xox!

lol wow you seem busy with all this , so i'll do ya a favor and do 3, and all you have to do is my newest 4, and if you feel like doing 6 then go for it and do any!! thanks ahead!!! and btw nice haiku!

Lol.. I just did the haiku. =)

But I havn't posted my new song yet. So you don't have to do any in return, yet. Lol. But I'll do that other poem of yours when you post it. Mmkay?

Okay, today's a weekday, so I plan on getting a lot done. I hope everyone had a good father's day, for those that celebrate it, and look forward to your well-earned comments.

Fathers Day? It hasn't been Fathers Day yet? It's like months away? :/

You're in Australia right natalie? Father's day in the UK and USA is the third sunday of June.

^^

and Canada..

a bunch of countries actually. not australia though

Are you serious?

I think our fathers day is in.. September.

wikipedia 'father's day' and check it out!

jessy, i've finished reading your poems

(i'm going out of order today, no particular reason or sense to it)

Okay, read Binks Unwritten's two poems.

4 poems read of APoeticSoul