RRC only 1 poem, and get ANY NUMBER done

hi everyone...please, read/rate/comment (make sure you do all three things)my latest poem called PARADISE....and i will be very glad to RRC any poems of yours you tell me...any number...i love reading. but please make sure you do all...and if you want honest comments, please give me honest comments to. i aim to improve..

thanks a lot fellow poets...critiques really help, AND make my day :) so lets make each others' day :p
cya

could you do a few of mine please? i would really appreciate it! thank youu!

All three of you are done. =)

well i am off to read yours now could you do my two featured ones please?

Did do. and it is incredible. i'm speechless. Any of my latest you'd like to r/r/c on would be wonderful... wow! that poem was so good =O

I read, rated, and commented for you.

I LOVED IT.

Any of my featured would be wonderful, thanks!

I will do it, please do only 2 of mine:

Mumbles and Mourners

The Minotaur

Thanks

Then you've got a deal.

Life's Sad Truth (I'm sorry for being who I am)
Life's Sad Truth
Life's Lullaby
What Is Home,

and any other one you like.. but I too would love a good bash on my poems.. i don't like :"great job 5/5" since it doesn't help.

Wow... that was my pleasure to read. Excellent write. Left comment on your poem. If you can r/r/c a few of my newer poems, that would be great. Thanks!

J. Lau