~*~ANOTHER CONTEST BY RAVE~*~!!!!!

Come on people PLEASE!!!!!!!!!

I'm getting as beggy as Allanah. lol. PLEASE!

is there neway i can change mine 2 disolve and decay by hawthorne heights instead of hear me. i thot i cood do it but i cant n b4 i said i coodnt do the other but i can now. lol do can i switch? if not ill tri, its hard tho!

I reserved 'How do I live' And, I'm just letting you know i'm nearly done writing it.. Just incase you thought I'd forgotten about it..

xX[. How Do I Live .]Xx

How do I live without you here with me?
I ask myself that every single day.
Though there's memories of you in my mind,
I still can't make all this pain go away.

How do I live without you here with me?
Is the only thing that goes through my head.
I still can't get past the fact that you're gone,
When I was the one who found you dead.

How do I live without you here with me?
I'm seriously starting to lose control.
Even though I didn't really know you,
Your death has taken a piece of my soul.

How do I live without you here with me?
Is what I will ask you again once more.
Tell me how do I survive without you,
When I know you won't walk back through that door.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

{Sorry it took me so long, It was hard for me to write..}

~*WC*~ you can do any poem you want, I'll reserve disolve and dicay ( or whatever it's called) and take away hear me. I want you to be avble to have fun, not for this to be a hastle.

Can I reserve falling away from me? i'm going to actual put some time into this poem. Thanks

#7~*`Falling Away From Me`*~
By: Bryce Dressler

Together forever, until death do us part
was just a promise when our love had start.
We'd walk together in the sun and rain
laughing and smiling showing no pain.

The way your hand, fit perfectly with mine
the way your hair, in the sun, would shine
You were perfect in every possible way
and I prayed to god I could keep you everyday.

You gave birth to a gorgeous little girl
and to you and me both, she meant the world.
She grew up so fast and you'd both pick on me
But you'd both say I was the best dad in history.

When you were right I'd always disagree
Pretending to be mad just to say "I'm sorry."
Holding each other close in the starry night
I didn't want to let you go so I would hold you tight.

We had our fights but kept our love strong
We fixed our family when it had gone wrong.
I never in a million years thought I'd say goodbye
But as these words left my mouth I began to cry.

It was mother and daughter day at work
and when it came up all you did was smirk.
You brought her in September 11th, 2001
The fateful day that our family was undone.

As the planes crashed, one by one
I couldn't believe what had been done.
I rushed to the city within the hour
and came upon the scene of the "former" twin towers

Rushing through the tape into the rubble
an officer threw me down without any trouble.
"Officer please" I cried, "Is my wife and daughter okay?"
He noticed who I was and his hand pointed away.

I looked where he pointed, and took off fast
Searching every vehicle I found them at last.
Laying on a stretcher only brought more alarm
as I noticed my daughter, in my wifes arms.

Pulling an EMT over I asked, "Are they alright?"
He pulled me aside out of the siren light.
"We rescued them after the towers crashed
and pulled them out of the darkened ash.

They were not moving they could not speak
they were gone before we got there, just out of reach.
I'm very sorry sir, I will leave you alone."
And left him with the family of his own.

Three days had past as he stood in a pew
he still couldn't believe this nightmare was true.
Walking up to the stand he wiped his tears
and spoke to the mass that had gathered here.

"This was my daughter, this was my wife
on September 11th terrorists took their life.
They meant the world to me, and nothing less
But now today I stand here a complete mess.

See my daughter, she was only three
but on that day she fell away from me.
My love in every way, she was my wife
but on September 11th terrorists took her life.

They meant the world to me as you can see
but since that morning they've been falling away from me."
Turning around he looked at his family sad as can be
softly sobbing he fell down to one knee.

He looked up at his wifes beautiful face
and gave his daughter one last embrace.
Placing his hands upon their eyes
he closed them shut, and said goodbye.

With five other men, they lifted the casket
as his heart slowly begun to split.
They placed his family in the ground
and all around the yard, no one made a sound.

Placing a single rose on each of the coffins
lowering the caskets, he began to die within.
Wiping the flowing tears from his eyes
Bowing his head over the grave he said his final goodbye.

(C) 2006 Bryce Dressler

((I was reading news of 9/11 before I had written this.))

Dissolve and Decay

My love for you, stronger then the heat of the sun,
Each second with you is so much fun.
Yet now we don’t talk, don’t know why,
I’m sorry for whatever, although you make me cry.

Each breath I take, hurts me more,
Each time I recall you walking out the door.
Don’t know why, but this seems to be the end,
I’ll miss you darling; you were such a great friend.

Each time I think of you, I decay inside,
It’s like to you, I’ve suddenly died.
My heart’s dissolving, so this is all,
I’ll no longer be there if you fall.

I’ll miss you baby, but I can’t take this,
I wish you could say the same, but I won’t be missed.
Hope one day you can dissolve like me,
Decay like a dead man, then you’ll finally see-

How much you hurt me.

~*W.C?*~
sry i took so long, i been havin horrible writers block this week, i dun kno why:(

good job u guys, keep um coming!

~bump~

this is a really long contest....

I agree, I'll give it a day or two more, okay!

I changed the end date to the 26th.

ahh thank you, you are such a friendly contest holder or whatever it's called.

oh yeah **host

that, or I'm just as impatient as the lot of you. lol.

****************RESULTS!!!****************

4th-Sarah Drew & ~*Who Cares?*~
3rd-Allanah & Jessy
2nd-~*NoniWang*~(F-Eyes) & Sean Allen
1st-APoeticSoul & Bryce Dressler

Once again my indeciciveness prevails (and my bad spelling, it would seem!) so there are 2 winners for everyone, and they were so great I also added a 4th place, but umm yeah. It's just cuz you all rock my sox!!!!!

I will start r/r/c-ing very soonish!

*************RESULTS!!!*******************

I finished APoeticSoul's and Allanah's comments. I have to go now, but I'll do the rest later!

hey Thanks a ton. I think ths is the first time i've taken 1st :p You can take any 6 on my featured. Thanks Again!

once again...i failed. congrats winners!

yay thnx:D

Arwen, you did not fail, cuz I loved ur poem and ur going on my favorites. I hope to r/r/c on ur poems soon.

good job all!