Honest Posts

To be honest, not particularly. You seem to lack emotion and structure. It's all just a bit ... "higgledy piggledy"

wow.. summer hunny.. you asked for honest posts.. she just told you what she though, you dont have to go and attack her poetry..

omfg, you ask for peoples honest opinions then trash her poem for telling you what she thought, what was the point in you starting this thread, if you cant handle the truth dont ask for it.
why trash peoples poems out of spite because you dont like what you hear (read)
the answer to your question, your poems have room for improvement your featured one sounds like a story.

To be bluntly honest, Summer... I think you suck. Your poems have no structure and no emotion. I read When the World is Falling. I don't think you know what it's like to have your world falling down around you - if you do.. you don't truly show it. That had to have been one of the most emotionless, half-assed poems I've read here. Your work doesn't have the voice like some of our better writers like Angelina, Darien, Poetess, and if I may, myself. Work on it, and get better [that's what this site is for, really] and you won't have such negative feedback

And it's not just your poetry that needs growing, it's you too. Your maturity level is quite low and in need of adjustment... You seem to not be able to handle criticizm at all. When you ask for honesty, be prepared for not only positive comments, but for very negative ones too, because you never know the audience you're performing to.

not a good idea. locked. besides, there's already a new one of these.