Lost Control. {1 for 2}

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    CLOSED

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go.. :) you dont have to do any in return, i just enjoy reading your poems.. xox!

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  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    bam! commented! =P

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks. =)

    And the crying dry meant she's run out of tears to cry. And, You were kinda close on the story line of it Sean.

    Anyone else..

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  • Sean Allen
    19 years ago

    pssst... cheer up!

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I'm trying =)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Kay, I did two for you Sean. =)

    Anyone else...

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  • UnToLd TrUtH
    19 years ago

    I'll read yours.... :)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks. =) I'll do yours when I'm awake though. Cause I'm going to sleep cause I have to wake up in two hours. So if anyone else wants to comment it for me, I'll return all the comments when i'm back here =)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Anyone else...............

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    if i do a different one for you will you do my two latest? :P

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    You don't have to do any others. I'll do your latest two anyway. =)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Mallori: Just did your two. =)

    I'll do two for you in a sec kay Jessy..

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    aww, are you sure? because i dont mindd! :D

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I'm sure tehe. I prob owe you more than two anyway =P Lol..

    Anyone else though?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Mmkay. Did your two Jessy =)

    Anyone else?

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    thankk youu :D

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    That's okay =) Tehe

    Anyone else?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Anyone at all?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I'm getting bored =(

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    lol, i did your very first poem! does that count? :P

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Wahhhhh!?!?! Lmao...Why would you do my very first one? Lol.. Is it as bad as I though it was lol. But I spose that count's ...since I won in your contest =P I'll try and get two of yours done soon. I just started writing something.. Lol =)

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    hehe.. i though it was good! :P still WAYY better than any of my poems.. lol! if you want, i can wait until you've written your poem and then ill comment that one insteadd.. :D

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  • Bridgette
    19 years ago

    I'll do it!! Could you please do my newest two? thanks in advance!

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    you done your poem yeeet? tehee.. hang on, ill go check.. :)
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    nope.. :P

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. not yet.. I've only done two stanza's lol..

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  • johnnys_princess
    19 years ago

    ive commented and voted on your poem

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thanks. I'll start on yours and Jessy's in a second, Mmkay?

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Kay, I'm done with both of you. =)

    Anyone else? Lol..

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  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    thankeww taleee! love youu! :D

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Thaaaaats okay =D

    I.Love.You.More. {And we -will- get out revenge on Darien} Haha =P

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    nooo!!! hahaha

    never! :P

    Read your new poem Nat!..
    awesome stuff ;)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. Which one?

    But yesssssssssss!! Lol.. We'll get our revenge. I don't know -how- yet. But we will *nods* believe it or not, but we will. Lol..

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  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Can you Rate Under the Cherry Tree and World of Children

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    haha will do Noni!.. once I get home :)

    and Nat, I totally missed one of your new poems.
    But I got it ;)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Was I meant to do those two poems.. or.. are you Darien? I'm confused?

    Haha, you're just sucking up cause you just don't want me and Jessy to plan our revenge. =P

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  • LadyPearl
    19 years ago

    Lol, yeah,

    -Under the Cherry Tree

    And a early thanks to you Darien.

    -^-»TaLeEe!, you better write a lot more poems since you've been winning spots on my contests! I'm running out of stuff to read! LOL

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Hang on. I'm still confused. {My minds abit -gah- right now} Do I comment that?

    But I've got a few poems that I havn't posted yet. But.. I've decided instead of writing 3-4 poems a day. I'm gonna try and cut down abit. Cause I've noticed. Since I stopped doing alot in one day.. and just do one every two days or something.. They turn out better? So yeah. I've got alot of poems though, Like 160 something lol =P

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  • Arcane Blondie
    19 years ago

    All done!!! great poem by the way----

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  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comment on your poem. Good write.

    J. Lau

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