i nEED help on mY new PoeM!

  • kelS;
    19 years ago

    i just rote a free verse.. becuase thats was people wanted .. so now i am donee.. so please comment it and say what i could do better! thankss!

    -Kelseyy.

    (by the way its called "him..."

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    Sure. Why not *Shrugs*

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go.. :)