i nEED help on mY new PoeM!

Name : kelS;
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Joined : Jun 9, 2005
Posts : 41

kelS;
19 years ago

i just rote a free verse.. becuase thats was people wanted .. so now i am donee.. so please comment it and say what i could do better! thankss!

-Kelseyy.

(by the way its called "him..."

- Name : Kaylee
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- Joined : Jun 17, 2006
- Posts : 77
Kaylee
19 years ago

Sure. Why not *Shrugs*

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- Name : Jessica
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- Joined : Mar 16, 2006
- Posts : 2558
Jessica
19 years ago

there you go.. :)

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i nEED help on mY new PoeM!