A new poem I need comments on!

Hi,
I have submitted a new poem called "Summer night", I would appreciate it if you could rad and comment on it.
Also if you could also comment my poem "close together"
Thankyou
love Tara-Kay
Beautifully poetic

come on, and i've written a new one called "Angels wings"

Sure can you read, "Life-sentence." and rate it. It's really personal and was hard to put the rough draft up never mind this version of it.