"Sitting on top of the world", new poem, please comment

new poem, needing comments.
"Sitting on top of the world", I enjoyed writing this poem, and i think the end outcome is really good.
Please rate and Comment, I will return the favour asap
love Tara-Kay
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anyone. This poem is one of the best one's i've written this month, please
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oh, come on guys. I absolutely need comments on it.