"Talk With A Stranger"

Please, if anyone will, comment on my latest posted poem- "Talk With A Stranger".

Thank You
Steve

^^ that doesnt quite sound right buddy...seems like an incomplete sentence..I think you mean

"Please, can anyone comment on my latest poem 'Talk with a stranger'"

ya see people don't read poems when grammar is so awful like that sir cranky pants...I was two seconds from reading it until I saw your nasty remark on my request...Have a great day pumpkin

There is nothing wrong with the sentence I typed in the previous box. It seems you have made yourself out to be more foolish than I thought, not to mention immature. You are only angry with me because I pointed out one of your many flaws. If you were at all serious about writing, you would take this as an oppurtunity to learn something and reform your style. Your poor choice in handling this situation shows me that you are not as smart as you tried to prove, just now. One thing I did notice was that in only one instance did you use two periods for the Ellipsis. Good job! You are well on your way to progression. Keep it up and you might learn how to address a person in a more respectable way than pumpkin.