There's A World OUT THERE!!!

Please r/c my new poem

-There's a world out there

The poem does not apply to everyone, please do not be offended by it's content.

I did it..it was great, can you do my new on " tonight is the night" thanksssssssss

Done! ..If you could do my latest one.. that would be cool =) Thanks if you do.

Thank you

my newest. can you rate as well

left ya a comment can you provide me feedback on mine called Lost Spirit?

Much appreciated!

Kaylee, you were right in your comment, my poem was mainly directed at people who complain but don't DO anything helpful.

LET me REMIND you that this POEM DOESN"T refer to EVERYONE! I've gotten comments saying I'm a stereotypical person. I'm only writing what other people have said on this site. It May or May NOT refer to YOu