R/C's Poems

Hey I would R/C 3 of your poems if you R/C
my newest ones~

~4ever

I will do yours if you do
My wrists are continuously bleeding parts one and two..( its one poem but on two pages)
What if
Suicide is painless
Our endless argument

You pick which three, doesnt matter!
and i promise i will do yours tonight, b/c i have to go now!!! thanks

Ok, i did them! they were a bit scary..but great

haha we were fighting about an eating disorder...it is confusing but if you take it stanza by stanza it gets better..like she did the first and was yelling at me, so i did the second and yelled bak then her then me...and so on and so on...that is how it's supposed to be!

Okay I commented all your poems you had up there.. They were great and thanks for telling me. =P dumb me.. I also have new poems up and if you would liek to r/c them your more then welcome to.. I work hard on my poems hoping you guys would like them!

~4ever

haha your not dumb, it confused a lot of people we are just having a big disagreement and so we figured we would argue about it through poem form...i will check your new ones out!! You are a great writer babe!!! You can do anyyyyyyyyy of mine..i dont care...they all need comments lol

im writing poetry like a magic trick.. omg i cant stop and im so tired tho.. ill keep writing til i fall asleep in the chair.. da*n they make these thinks so comfortable.. grr lol.. im writing a poem called Pounding now.. lol an Lasha is like holy crap you are so good.. its good to hear some people like my poems

Glad you do too.. I Love your poems too..

~4ever

yeah, i just wrote a new one called umm shit what is it called... -thinks-

Oohhhhh God help me... ( i think =/)

NO ITS NOT ITS CALLED.. God i need you

i'm such a idiot!

lol... ill r/c on it..

Im done with my poem POUNDING

~4ever

ANY MORE TAKERS?

Can you do:

Leave the past behind
Starting over new
and you pick the last one

thank you
jamie