New Poem: "Disappearing Act" 3 for 1

Hey everyone, I wrote a new poem called "Disappearing Act". I would like for you to read it, and let me know what you think. If you r/r/c on it, I will return the favour on 3 of your poems. The reason I'll do 3 is because I'm out for this weekend, and I will feel bad for not getting back to you earlier.

So 3 of your poems for 1 of mine. But don't be worried if you don't get a comment until Wed, next week. Just leave a comment on here, or on my poem, and I will return all favours!.. Thanks and take care :)

Darien

Thanks Nat..

I totally forgot to edit that line :P hhehe thanks for reminding me :D

Haha, It's okay.