Long awaited poem! Please comment

hello,

some of you may have remembered that back in January, I wrote a poem called "Murder in a warehouse".
I wrote it for a story i was working on, with college and being so busy, i hadn't added much to the story, but recently, with time on my hands, the story is on it's way to completion.
Just submitted a poem called "Her little girl was murdered", which is the following poem in the story.
Hope that you enjoy it as much as you enjoyed the first, and if you havent read it then please do.

Love Tara-Kay

Oh, Come on! I know you guys loved that poem.
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Hey, I really want some comments.
"Murder in a warehouse" was a great hit!
so you'll love this one!!!!!!!!!

i did, and it was great...........
can you comment on my DID I LIE please

i did, it was a v.good poem

anyone else?
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no? i can't believe it!!!!!!!!!
come on!