cmon people!!

i really would like ur opinion on my work i jus start dis out again nd my old work nd one new rhyme is up id really like to kno wat yall think nd if u think ive gotten betta or if im slackin nya mean plz get at me nd check it out iight thankz everyone bye

lol

1)Your grammer is atrocious and your spelling is even worse.
2)It's a poetry site not a place for paragraphs without punctuation, even freestyle poems have more form than that.

it culd jus be typing slang...we should never be judging ppl for how they appear....i believe that is wrong...nobody is perfect

you wouldn't know if his poems are written like that if you never went to take a look....who knows you cannever judge a book by its cover.

i will go leave you some comments and check out your writes...no problem.

yah well u dont know me move out to my neck of the woodz nd ud understand my way of life asshole