two new poems

Comment on mine and I'll comment on as many of yours that intrigue me. I leave very honest comments, so be forewarned if you like fluffy "that was awesome" kind of stuff, don't ask me.

Thanks ahead of time!

Two-for-one trade off, easily, but quite frequently once I get to someone's profile I read until I'm bored.

I read one of your poems.. was good..
cant read any of the love ones though..
i'd have to wait til i'm home :(

I find that so interesting... because the fact that people can't read love poems at work seems quite silly to me. It's not like they're "sex" poems or something... I don't get it.

Anyway thanks!

It is indeed silly,
I can read explicit poems without a hastle..
I guess the contents of a 'love' poem are blocked due to the fact it has something to do with 'dating'.
Well, according to my office.

Thanks Melissa, I just read another 2..
I thought it was interesting reading some of your older stuff..

Yeah sometimes it seems the older stuff was written by a different person. I reconsidered posting any of them on here for a long while but some of them are pretty good so I kept them.

Anyone else? R/C/C please? :)