New Poem: "Forever and Always" 2 for 1

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    I posted a new poem called 'Forever and Always', I know the title is popular, but it goes really well with the poem. Anyways, if you r/r/c on my poem, I will return the favour on 2 of your poems.

    2 of yours for 1 of mine.
    Thanks,

    Darien

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. I already did it. Lmao!! Sorry for leaving 2 extra comments. It didn't put everything I said in the first one cause I made an arrow sign. Yeah. Lol.

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    lmao! haha thats ok :P

    it was funny!!

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha. Cause I did this.. --> but the other way around. And then it deleted everything after that. Lol

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  • Kara !
    19 years ago

    It was beautiful.

    If you could just comment on Indifference (To The World). No need to do another.

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  • Wings Of Flames
    19 years ago

    wil do
    thanks
    ~Emah

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks Kara! Thanks Emma!

    Done both of yours!

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    One hour until my birthday is over. =(

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    awww..

    :(

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. Now it's 32 minutes until it's over.

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Sorry Breezy and Johanna!..

    I can't read your love poems here at work, so I will have to when I get home. I just hope I feel the mood for poetry and not collapse on my bed and fall asleep. Lol.

    Done for now..

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  • not a poet
    19 years ago

    i will comment and rate! i only have two, so that would be great! lol that rhymed!

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Lol, haha nice! Thanks Danielle, I'll get to yours!..
    woo!.. Gonna have to choose ... which to read first :P hehehe

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Done!..

    Thanks for reading :)

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    It's sad I can't even read my own poem at work..

    anyways I'm going home now.. so I can read love poetry!! woohoo!!!.. so anyone else?

    As long as you r/r/c, I will always return the favour!!

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I did it three times =P

    Haha, Sorry. I thought I'd bring your thread back to the top for you cause it was at the bottom. =)

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  • J Lau
    19 years ago

    Left comment on your poem. Brilliant!

    J. Lau

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks J. Lau,
    just finished 2 of yours :)

    Anyone else?

    and thanks Nat :P

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha, It's okay =P

    Argh. I'm really ______ off.

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    at who??..

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ok, we'll leave that alone..

    anyone else?..

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hmm, ok anyone else?..

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol. ME! ME! MEEEE! =)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Yeah, Darien. You need new writes. Cause I can't write anymore. Lol..

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Same here! Lol.. My brains just turned to mush. Even though it already was mush. Lol..

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Gah!.. I am working on one :P hahah
    It's going to be another mushy love poem ;)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Awww!

    Mushy love poem. How cuuuuuute!

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Actually, I might have to save it..
    I'm going to give it to my girlfriend!

    I don't want her reading it on here,
    cuz I know she comes on and checks.

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Oooooooooooooooooh. That sucks! :/

    HAHA! Are you and Breezy still here?

    Cause yeah.

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