.x. Ottava Rima Contest .x.

I'm actually writing one right now but for another contest. Can I enter that?

Woo! Koolio. I just finished it then. But It won't be posted yet with my poems. {and spank youuu =D}

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Fading Away.

Can you see me slowly fading away,
My presence drifting into the distance?
The tears I've cried no longer display,
The pain that I feel through all the silence.
My mouth is sewn shut so words cannot spray,
Of what is trapped inside of my conscience.
Would you rather have me slip down and fall,
Or should I never say goodbye at all?

Can you feel all of the pain that I feel,
The throbbing ache that is within my mind?
Are you aware of what my lies reveal,
Or have you now become completely blind?
All of my truth to you seems too unreal,
And that's why you don't try to dig and find.
Will you reach deep and force it out of me,
Or are you just going to leave me be?

Can you hear of this help that I crave for,
As I am screaming it towards your ears?
Begging and crawling all over the floor,
Still reaching for your hand while I'm in tears.
Being pushed back; I can't take anymore,
Rejection is one of my biggest fears.
Save me from who you have made me become,
Because you know that you're not the victim.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

Cmon people. Give this contest a go. You all know you wanna =P

Child of the Night

All the angels ignore my howling plead,
Sending death's kiss in a pink rose bouquet.
Grave dug on hells turf, ready to proceed,
At the sun set on my very last day.
My blood squeezed from my eyes, tears to concede,
As this hunger inside me fades away.
Left in a wooden cage to suffocate,
Death consumes me as I disintegrate.

They used to call me the ‘child of the night’
Forever bathed in misery’s presence.
Not a human but a demon of plight
A beast feeding on world pain in essence
My tongue took the melancholy of light.
And the innocence in me now lessens,
Burning prey with smoke from my father’s hand
I’m the devil’s daughter, the child of man...
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Great idea, thanks for the contest it was very challenging!

Woo! That was great! ..Was that your first go at trying one of these? Cause I thought you did really good. =D tehe.

lol yeh it was *blushes* thankyou =D I do like yours though, it flows really well! Great Job and good luck!!

Tehe. That's okay. =D And thank you too. =D woo! Good luck to you aswell. =P

Come on people! Give it a go, its fun!

Sunset in Motion

Into the distance, I humbly stare
Trying to capture a glimpse of your eyes
But you flitter away with not even a care
And disappear in the celestial sky.
I hold fast to secrets that we once shared
As the brilliance of you starts to die
Now I sit in the afterglow that you cast
And grieve for the moments that didn't last.

The moon rises higher, It's God's sacred gift
For all Nature's creatures must at some time sleep
They all close their eyes and in slumber they slip
And grasp at the dreams that were meant to be.
I look to the sky and my soul starts to lift
For beautiful stars shine brightly on me
I gladly accept the night's gentle kiss
And bask in the embers of nocturnal bliss

WOW! *rubs eyes in disbelief* holy...just incrediable, that is awesome writing, good luck!!

Umm. I think this contest might have to be closed. :/

Kristen's account was suspended. I don't know why though.

aww that sucks! I had fun with that contest too it was a real challenge. =(

well i got a ? i heard that it was a different style of poem, what do u have 2 do?

Thank you Beautifully//Broken for stepping forward to do it =) come on people... its a lot of fun, please enter!

ok, this is an example ill enter wen i understand.

like the 1st line could be like:

I want pie haunt high taunt crazy hazy?

lol just an example...

OH I GET IT NOW! i was royally confused! ill do it now:D

ok

Sadness controlling my mind every day,
Ever since you left, I can’t hardly think.
You have turned my life into skies so gray.
As I hide my tears, with a constant blink.
I have nothing to do, nothing to say,
As I wash my endless tears down the sink.
I am not sure anymore about you,
All I know is that I won’t say “ado”

One day you’ll realize what you’ve done to me,
But I won’t be here anymore, to cry.
I will move on in time, but can’t you see?
I don’t want to ever! Can’t you just try?
I want you and me to become happy.
Please baby, just give me a single chance,
Just one time, give me a chance for romance…

Do I have time to enter one tomorrow?

Solemn Walk

Shadows tracing trees of bloody leaves
Engulfing the Bright moon in brilliant red
Dripping gold from bags of thieves
Watching as bound young witnesses bled
To the night goddess their cry decieves
Who still lives and who will be dead
Oracles crumbled, shimmered and shattered
Pieces of evidence soaring and scattered

Past massacres and abandoned dread
Past serene castles where flowers bloomed
But traces of vain courting still shred
Any other joyful emotion that loomed
To darkness it's blissful smile is fed
It's old memories and future consumed
Till nothing but seeds hid in the ground
Afraid of thirsty demons coming around

Here lies photos revealing inner pain
Gathered from walks near and afar
Every glimmer of hope has been slain
Destroyed by the Idea of who we are
Cast into fire of this forbidding ordain
Burning tints of emotions raw
Mercy shows no pity on these days
Tangled together in decaying dismay

wOo! Yay. It's finished =D

Good luck everyone!

Yay!

Lol.. It is too. Haha! =P

No, wait. It's Sunday where I live. :/ Lmao

Same here!

Wow! Thank you!! Congrats to Póετε§Š Call Me Glen-Duh! and everyone else whom entered!!