Completely lost it

that is my new poem...r/r/c please and yeah yeah you know the deal!

OH COME ON PEOPLE..PLEASE?

Also done.

You may not like what I have to say...

ok people i have something to say...what i wrote is NOT a poem..Well yes, I lknow that I could have told you that my damn self...and furthermore i already stated that it didn't rhyme and it didn't make sense..and also if you are going to leave me a comment do not repeat what i already have said..it wasnt meant to be a poem..it wasn't meant to be anything but words comin out b/c of the way i felt! You can comment that is what i want and you all have your own opinions i know that..but before you type something, make sure i didnt already clarify it first..thanks

Actually, I think my comment was pretty damn nice, seeing how I focused on the positive things.

i wasnt talking to you babe....

i'll do yours in a minute tho!

Like I said: put it in the right place, get the comment you're looking for. Excellent monologue, but NOT something to put on a poetry site.