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Lemme know what you guys want done. remember i cannot do love or friendship poems! gr8 job every1 that was hard!

I shall enter! But I need a little bit to figure out a poem!

I send my huggles!

Who Cares,

Does it have to be ABOUT the song? Or can it be just what we were thinking or feeling during the song? I wrote something while listening to one of my favorite songs, and it's kind of like it, but not really. Does that make sense? Well, get back to me asap... I have a poem already..

And are you aloud two poems?

OK question one, yes it can be your song i guess. as long as it is the title of a song. don't forget to say who the famous song is by:D

question 2 lol it doesn't have to be ABOUT the song, just using the TITLE of the song. don't use the title and have it be about something COMPLETELY different though......its not really about what you are feeling either..just using the title of the song and writing a poem like it....get it?

and question 3. no, 1 per person plz. sry ill add that 2 the rules.

OK ANYMORE QUESTIONS?!?!?! lol.

I'm not sure if this qualifies...Tell me if it doesn't.

Wings Of A Butterfly (I even based it off the first line of the song)

Heaven blazes our eyes,
We stand still in sacrifice,
Autumn sings her lullaby,
We take it in as Heven cries.

The sun sings a mournful tune,
He shines over butterfly tombs.
Darkness arises with the coming moon,
He's the reason for the sun's failing doom.

The stars gather around in wonderous surprise,
The watch aghast as the sun quickly hides,
Watching closely as the moon comes to defy,
Witnessing silently as the burning sun dies.

-Wings Of A Butterfly By HIM
--I used the first line of the song, I do realize.

---I'm not sure if this is what you're talking about, for you made it seem like I was supposed to write another song, but I like it. I'll take it out if it's wrong. XD At least I tried.

xDarkSuicdex

All My Fault

When I was in pain, you held my hand
When I was scared, you showed no fear
When I was bored, you made me laugh
.. So why are you not here?

When I was angry, you were calm
When I was confused, you showed me how
When I was lonely, you were there
.. So where are you now?

When I was depressed, you cheered me up
When I was out of tune, you sang our song
When I was naughty, you took the blame
.. So where have you gone?

When you were sad, I was with other friends
When you were quiet, I couldn't tell you were bereft
When you were crying, I was never by your side
.. No wonder you left

__________________
All My Fault - Felix TX
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. Good Luck All .

The Face of God---HIM

He tried to falsify me
He tried to mislead me
It's nothing but some fear
When the face of God appear

My soul tried to flee away
Away from his pathway
But he held on to me
Filling me in enmity

He once was my holy light
My only living delight
But then I saw his face
Through a dark phase

His eyes were cold as ice
His heart of hard demise
I was only some toy
To present him with joy

Flaws overcame greatness
Envy overcame softness
His face was of guilt and lies
Swirling fallacy in vivid eyes

The face of God was Devil's twin
Hiding Identity from it's sin
Feeling lost to this deception
Hope mixed with obliteration

Haha! This is gonna be hard for me.

..All my favourite songs are like.. gangsta songs. Lmao.

Are we allowed to post old poems???

or do they have to be newly written??? because i have poems that i havent posted based offa song titleses!!!!

oh... forget it. ill just do a new one.

Think of Me (a poem for my little sister)

Think of me when you dont
have a place to go.
Think of me when you feel
unloved, and when you need a friend.
Think of me if life seems unbearable.
Think of me when you need a helping
hand.

Think of me because I'll of cover you.
I'll love you to the end of the earth
and back again. I can make life worth living.
I can help with all the problems rising in your life.

Think of me because i love you,
You are my best friend, and i would
die for you, just because you make me
smile.

Think of me because i can help...
and because i want to help.

Think of me, because i am your sister,
and if you have nobody else to think of,
you CAN think of me.

meh. i dont like it. but my sister did!!!

yay!!!

sorry for the triple post...

Haha, Glen-Duh!! ..It's gonna be hard for me.. My fav song {at the moment} is actually called "Gangsta gangsta" Lmfao! Or.. My other one is called "Snap Yo Fingers" HAHA!

Haha!

Well, I found one. =D I be writing it nowwwww. Tehe.

Glen-Duh!!!! it be-eth a poem for my little sister. we havent been getting along all that great for a while so i just wanted her to know that she could always count on me!

October by Evanescence

I miss the Autumn.
The transition between life
And death.
I can only see you then.
We meet in teh middle,
For oyu are life
And I am death.
We meet in October.
So many memories were made there
Under the cloud covered sun,
With the red and gold leaves
Spiraling around us.
Encasing us in a blanket
Of pure Autumn...
Of pure October.
And when we meet for that one month,
I know
I'll only have a year to wait
Until I can see you
Smile and dance again.

*this is my favorite song of the moment*

Actually, I don't like the one I wrote..

Are we allowd to alter the name.. Cause I have a song name I could use, but I'd need to alter it abit.. Lol

this is an old one, but still fits the criteria. nine inch naiils baby

[With Teeth]

many

huddle around him—chattering
shaking sighing—smiling
as if to celebrate whats left
in these moments; the rivers overflow

with rust— brick by brick, skies
are sent toppling and break
their own reflection. the man
wheezes into a tearing cough while

his eyes search the clouds. stifling
the worst of it and covering his mouth
with a blood-specked rag—
He waits. count how many

times he lifts a mottled hand
to his face— watch the broken
discordant twitches of
movement, yet, never wonder how

long it will be. close your eyes and
forget how silent it is without
the sounds of his lungs being shredded
and lost within the guttural screams.

the sun sinks from his dreams and
at once, the oceans freeze solid—
one monstrous mass with row upon
row of sharp and sudden teeth.

I finally finished mine =D Lol.. It's pretty bad though..

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Bleeding Mascara. {Atreyu}

A Tear of pain fills up her most beautiful eyes,
Shimmering in the dark behind her own disguise.
Thoughts are racing as if there is no tomorrow,
Last minute plans to destroy all of her sorrow.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Her lips are shaking from the words that she can't say,
With smeared lipstick on her face that won't wash away.
Screeching voices that are deafening her weak ears,
Dragging her right along to her own pool of fears.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Empty bottles lay across her tiled bathroom floor,
As she stumbles down the hallway to find some more.
Trying to numb the pain of her exploded heart,
The very same heart that you tried to tear apart.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Tasting death as if it's an antidote drug that heals,
Anything to help her escape the pain that she feels.
Singing a sweet lullaby to send her off to sleep,
Now that the pain you have caused has sunken too deep.
Bleeding mascara is all that she's now prone to,
After all of the things you had to put her through.

Copyright © Natalie 2006

hi sry i havent been on i was at magic mountain yesterday old poems are fine. and alter it how much? and like it can be a spanish title translatd, you got 2 put the spanish and english title, and the artist still:)

btw 9 more 2 go.

((Here's one I just did for a contest, i like the song to so here it is.))

~Superman's Dead~ Our Lady Peace
By: Bryce Dressler

Johnny J Smith
had straight A's in school.
Class president every year
he never broke the rules.

Had the coolest friends
never got in fights.
But his friends never saw him
after school at night.

Every problem thrown his way
he fought it to the end.
His family and friends
referred to him as superman.

Saving damsels in distress
standing up for the weak.
He had the intelligence of a genius
the room was always quite when he'd speak.

But nobody knew what happened
late every single night.
When Johnny was caught in the middle
of his mother and father's fight.

Every day after school
Johnny would walk home alone.
Come home to his parents,
to a family with a heart of stone.

Objects were thrown
as they fly across his face.
He tried so hard to please
but he was seen as a disgrace.

His grades would start to slip
and he would fight even more.
But the more that he fought
the harder he was thrown to the floor.

Friends began to leave him
people ignored him as he spoke
as hard as he tried to fix it all
his life was only seen as a joke.

Bottles and knives still flying
from one room to the next.
Giving up on everything else
he took advantage of one object.

He slowly cried as the pain took hold
remembering the life once adored.
Brought down to this sham
a life now ignored.

With his last remaining minute
he reached for a paper and pen.
Leaving a note for whoever cared
or cared for a life that once had been.

Days had past since then
before he was found
his parents killed each other
the house no longer made a sound.

Old friends came again
to see the horrible site
No soon after did they find the note
that the young boy did write.

Everyone held their breath
as the note was slowly read.
Written with four crimson words
"Your Superman is Dead."

(C) 2006 Bryce Dressler

8 more:)

come on......ill give u a virtual hug:D

yay! -hug- lol. nice work! keep em commin ppl!

:D no problemo. keep it commin!

:(

~buMp~

blah blah blah y wun ne1 enter!

COME ON!!!! 2 more days though....no matter WHO enters *humph*

lol, cmon WC, you run a good contest.... people just dont see it :p

*sniffle* so your saying im INVISIBLE?!

bryce thanks so much for the comment that was so sweet:D i fixed up that one part. thanks again:)

SO PEOPLE NO ONE WANTS TO WIN A DOLLAR?!

Nooooo, i was just saying,,,, wait yeah I was saying youre invisible.... just kidding, no you gotta make it fancy, like

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and yeah. :p But yeah the poem sounds really great now. That one part really made a difference. Sounds better than ever.

u make me feel so special *cries* lol jk. well next time ill REALLY make it stand out...

YAY! -hug- ok...either 2 days still or 6 poems!:D gr8 work bryan....btw ima start a new contest tri n find it:P

AWW!! How cute! Nsync's tha bomb!

I so entered that as well, Who Cares. ^.^

lol isnt it noticable?! :D

It is!

^.^

xDarkSuicidex

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