new poem, based on my life, needs comments

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    hi,
    in the week, something happened to my friend, something bad, something sad, and it was so terryfying, i wrote a poem about it.
    It's called "stabbed in self-defence", once you read it, you'll know what happened.
    It didnt affect me as much as it did her, understandably.
    please could you comment
    Love Tara-Kay

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    Come on, Id like some comments

  • Tara Kay
    19 years ago

    thanks so much Brianna

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    I'll read it.