Welcome Back...honest feedback

hey everyone, I haven't been on the site for a while and Im look some type of welcome back, Im trying to get back into writin poems because Im at a different point in my life now and think I can offer a new perspective, but I really want comments on my old poems so I can know where to improve.

Thanks, and I will return the favor

oh yea, especially "now that we're apart" and "fighting destiny" but any comments are appreciate, once again, I will give constructive comments in return

I did 2 but there wasn't much you need to improve on.....well atleast not much I could see.