Bleeding Mascara. 1 for 2

Mmyup. You all know how it goes. =P

One for two. =) ..Please no one liners, and make sure you rate. Thanks. xx.

okay, i'll do it now

please do my 2 newest
Birds (Haiku) and A message to the Angels (Epitaph)

Love Tara-Kay
P.S Please take into account its my first try at these types of poems

Thanks Tara-Kay, I've done those two for you. Very nice. =P

Anyone else?

sure thing.
check out my latest poems please.
Thanx

Thanks, I'll go start on yours now. =)

Anyone else?

Done. =)

..Anyone else at all?

I will. I have some new poems up but I would really like it if you read the poem on this site called, "In Mommy's Arms"
http://p068.ezboard.com/fpoeticmoonfrm38.showMessage?topicID=13.topic

Sure, Kaylee. {By the way it's Taleee =P ..do you want me to comment it there?}

Yes please. I don't know if I'll put it on this site.

hehe I had to check your name to make sure it was you before I read your poem lol

Alright, not a problem. =)

Lol.. Yeah. I've been changing my name alot lately.

Oh wait. It says I have to be a registered member to post a reply to it. I made an account on there ages ago, and I registed but maybe Sunny didn't accept me..

* You must be REGISTERED to post * (Register Here)

^^That's what it says..

lol happens to me sometimes. Try seeing where you log in. I know Sunny accepted you.

Woohoo!! =D It worked!! *does a little dance* Tehe

Yes I will read it =D

Thank you, Polly. =) I will do two for you in the morning though, as it's 1:13am now and I'm really tired. If anyone else wants to do this, go right ahead, all comments will be returned when I'm up. {And please don't forget to rate people =P}

Thanks Breezy, I'll start on it in a second. Once I've done Polly's aswell. =P

Anyone else?

Mmkay, All done. =D Tehe.

Anyone else?

Anyone else?

I posted my new one on this site after all. Just wanted to say thanks for the comment earlier.

That's alright, Kaylee. Did you want me to comment it again on here for you? ..well, I'm going to anyway. =P

I need to catch up on your poems :p

I know, Kaylee. You havn't been around for awhile. Tehe. I've done all your new ones now, except for the love one, which I'm going to do very shortly, Tehe. =P

=O! Rachey! *whispers* I love you, more! *sticks tongue out* Taha. xD

=O! Whatever Rachey. *puts hand up to your face* ..I love you, like.. 259874511364 times ALL of that. yeah. =P Take that. Haha xD

I did itttttt can you please do

Magazines and tabloids
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Attention

Thanks hun!

Thanks guys. =) And all done.

Anyone else?

Sure I'll comment on some of yours! You can comment on mine if you want to, but you don't have to. But if you do, all i ask is one thing...BE HONEST! Tear my work to pieces! lol

~Dana

p.s. I commented on Bleeding Hearts and another one that I can't remember the title...but it was an Ottava Rima

I don't think you commented on the one this thread was made for..........

But I'll do two for you shortly =)

Anyone else?