I need comment plz on this poem!!! Is this good or not!!!

  • kkly
    19 years ago

    She is MORE than special,,She is the greatest!!!
    by *~Aka~*

    She is like no other girl
    She is more like an angel
    The way she smile
    Can make me fly
    The way she looks at me
    Each time it make me go crazy

    More beautiful than all the White Roses
    She is perfect
    But her beauty is not all
    She have this weird sensation
    Something great,so powerful
    Even my heart just cant tell you
    Even my heart just cant show you
    How much I still need her
    How much I truly miss her

    She is more than special
    She is my sun
    Only her can bright my destiny
    For no more time to come
    I will prey for her happiness
    For her to live peacefully
    In this world without me

    Loving her in silence
    Hurt me so badly
    I would like to be with her
    But I dont think that
    She can love me back
    After what I did
    I just want to say
    I'm so sorry
    Would you forgive me

    So many as pass since
    And my love is still burning
    Like the first time
    It just cant stop
    Time goes by
    And i just cant forget her
    Damn its so hard
    To be secretly in love with her

    I LOVE YOU JESS!!!!!!!