I've got four poems: You can get eight comments

Alright but there is a catch. I want to know how the poems make you feel. What the strengths are. Are there any weaknesses. I would like them rated as well. Seriously, I need honest comments. You don't know how much I need those kinds. Leave your poems below but warning you, I leave honest comments as I expect from you. Double comments.

Isolation:
In Mommy's Arms:
Metal of Hunger: NO it is not a cutting poem.
I can't go there

Forgot to add this one to the list:
Stripped Basic (Raped Raw) So you can earn up to ten. Leave a one line comment and you get the same!

I did all five and I loved each and every one! Your poetry is so unique and it has so much emotion and described so very well!

Please read my featured poems and then you pick out the rest........
thanks-annmarie

I did 4 as have previously done 'Mommy's Arms' I did as you asked so the comments are a bit lengthy. Great talent.

When I'm done writin ghtis new poem I'll finish with the people above :)