Hello, I Am Spiderman!

Come read my adventures.

Ok, I'm not the real Spiderman.. but when I was little and was sad and depressed I use to pretend I was a superhero. It helped me cope with my parents divorce.

I voted my poems under 4 lol

Edited: for clarity. :)

Hi Spiderman
I have read all your poems and think they are great. I guess I mis-read your post I thought you were talking about your age LOL
Anyway great work. Maybe you would like to check out 'Please' as it's on a similar theme
Take care Spidey

Spiderman --
I`ll go check out a couple of your poems -- I`m bored and have got nothing to do. Accept this as a favor ;; no need to return it!
I thought you were referring to your age, as well. And I still don`t know what you`re talking about, so I better get to reading your poetry.

Have a great day
Samantha Hollywood

Samantha Hollywood and goddess-glamourpuss,

I loved and thank the way you took time to read and comment on my poems.
You are truthful, it helps me a lot.
I am new to writing poetry. So it will be sometime until I get even remotely fair at it.
I will just keep reading some of the great work of arts in this website and learn.
That's why I voted my own poems low. I hope I can vote them high one day. lol

hmm... for some reason I can't comment on my own poems. Anywho...
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Wow!!! Brianna! What are you doing wasting your incredible gift on my pathetic attempts to write?

I thank you guys for your honest critique.. I am truly touched. Makes me feel like crying.. I don't deserve such attention.

It is my first attempt at writing and I think I got it all wrong. I confused the narration with the child's voice.
Ex: Sikiatist is how he (Spidey) would say it, but if it's being narrated, it should spell Psychiatrist.

Poetry is harder than expected, but Spiderman will endure... rawr. :) lol

Samantha Hollywood, I think you are misunderstanding the whole Spiderman theme.
I am not writing "about" the real Spiderman.. it's about a child who hid behind a pretend hero to hide his emotions. You do have some very constructive criticism.. thank you

Poetry 101: Write down your work on your word processor, edit it, fix the mistakes before posting it. :) I left a whole bunch of mistakes. haha

I will

Um.. hello Spiderman, how is it swinging?

I like your poems and voted. I will comment asap.

You have one thing going for you that I love.. Imagination.
Your poems are raw, but your superhero theme is interesting. Be careful that you don't over do it though.

Most of us poets hid behind masks to hide our feelings at one point or another. That's why we write.
Some people have imaginary friends, you became that imaginary friend.
The important thing is to write.

I can't wait for the next adventure. heh

=O!! ..You're spiderman!! ..And I'm supergirl!! =O!!

OMG!!

I'll go read some. =)

haha.. and I'm superman.
but this is my umm.. normal identity..

No, Supermans secret identity is Clark Kent. :)

I think I'm getting the hang of poetry. I just need to start using longer words instead of the cliche ones.

I followed some of the advice offerd in the comments section. Thank you. It helped me a lot.

latest installment-
Spiderman vs The Medicines: Motionless I Lie

I still remember the effects.. I was overmedicated. lol