New Poem: "Forever's End" [1 for 2]

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Hey everyone,

    I have a new poem out called "Forever's End". It's a love poem, and I tried a different style. Check it out and tell me what you think. If you R/R/C on it, I will return the favour on 2 of your poems.

    Thanks,
    Darien

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    He'll also SHARE the cookie he has, if you do it~

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    I'll think about sharing..

  • Jessica
    19 years ago

    there you go! can i share youur cookiee? :P

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Fine.. there you go.. you get a small piece :)

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    nvm

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    awww :( Kaylee

  • Samantha Hollywood
    19 years ago

    I`ve already done it. =D Great job!! I loved it much.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks Samantha :D

  • Samantha Hollywood
    19 years ago

    hehe, welcome. =D you`re such a good writer ;; i envy you. Keep it up. =D

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    I would like everyone to know. I am going to change my name some day. So you should all start calling me; Darien the Great

    Thanks ;)
    Darien the Great

    hahahah ohh man that would be wicked cool if I had that name

  • Kaylee
    19 years ago

    OKay Darien the great I'll read it. Can you please read: Hush and In Mommy's Arms

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Thanks Kaylee!!!

    I read In Mommy's Arms already, so instead I read Isolation. Awesome stuff Kaylee.

  • Samantha Hollywood
    19 years ago

    Darien the great --
    I believe I read the post where you decided your name would be that ;; i believe it was the one where you were making cracks about ronald mcdonald being michael jackson? something like that.. lol. i think the name suits you. =D
    i noticed you play bass guitar? me too. =D

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Darien the great has just gone to eat something and then go to sleep..

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    I love how I don't have to change my username thingy and everyone knows what to call me..
    it makes me cry happy tears of joy :D

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ohhh and I returned the favour for you Breezy :P

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    ohhhhhhhh you're awake. =O!

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ahaha yeaa.. i had to go to a meeting :(

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    =( ..poor Darien the great, Lol..

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    "Only Because I Love You"
    &
    "You Are Amazing"

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    :) Your Welcome!!!

  • xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex
    19 years ago

    Rawr Darien, Rawr! I have returned!

    xDarkSuicidex

    It looks like you'll -never- get rid of me.

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    ^^ you creep me out :P
    hehe jks!!!

    and I will be right on that Garbear :)

  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Ok Garbear, I did 3.

    Hope that's enough!

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Omg, It's Darien!