~*~*~*~*jeSsA's tiTle cOnTeSt!!!*~*~*~*~

you know the drill.....just pick one and write about it!! Try to keep away from the death and suicide stuff......

1. I Will Carry You (*done*)
2. No More Sad Songs (*done*)
3. Run To Me (*done*)
4. My Beautiful (*done*)
5. Blue Clear Sky (*done*)
6. Like I Am (*done*)
7. Too Good Is True (*done*)
8. Our Roses (*done*)

1st place- 2 comments/votes
2nd place- 1 comment/vote
3rd place- 1 comment/vote
all others recieve a special place in my heart...lol

Can I reserve No More Sad Songs pleasE?

ok umm can it be sad but not dying or anything?

sure, it can be sad!!...and yes u can reserve that one!!!

hmm can i reserve run to me...:)

sure thing!!

can i reserve "Our Roses" please?

~ uh-huh!

May I reserve "My beautiful" please

~ yep!!

My beautiful

Many words to describe someone as special as you,
So many words that I’d say that are very very true.

My beautiful flower, so sweet, pretty and bright,
Blossoming daily throughout the summer flight.

My beautiful sky, may be blue or may be grey,
But it still looks as lovely in every possible way.

My beautiful garden, full of nature’s little joys,
That I can share with angels, friends and boys.

My beautiful singing, that flows around the air,
With the melody that I believe will always be there.

Someone who has said they’ll be there till the end,
Because she is always My beautiful best friend.

© Tara-Kay Randall 29th July 2006

"I will carry you"
by Wings of an Angel

I know youre going through a rough time,
My friend, I will help you out.
I know it's rough to not own a dime.
My friend, I will give you what you need.
I see youre crying inside youre soul.
My friend, I will be strong for you.
I can see youre missing something, not whole.
My friend, I can fill it for you.
I can see youre smiles are fake.
My friend, I will smile for you.
I can see youre on the edge to break.
My friend, I will carry you.

~ both are really beautiful!! keep em coming guys!!!

HEY CAN I CHANGE TO HOW I AM? i lost inspiration in the other...

~ it's Like I Am, but sure!!

that's what i meant...brain lapse..:P
ok here it is:)

Like I Am

I don’t understand, what’ve I done to you?
To make you feel the way about me that you do.
I thought you liked me too, but you said I was wrong,
But I know deep down inside, you’ve liked me all along.

I know the truth, I’ve been thinking for so long now,
The truth you hide, our love you won’t allow.
Because of your friends who would never go away,
We’re now nothing, but we could be big someday.

If your friends don’t like it, that’s too bad for them,
I like you for you; you’re my precious gem.
So if you want me to change to impress your friends…
That’s too bad, take me like I am, or this is the end.

You know AJ, despite how much you’ve made me cry,
I can’t let go of you although I’m not sure why.
I guess it’s because how much better I felt when you cared,
My broken heart you just magically repaired.

But this seems to be it so goodbye, I love you,
I hate to say it but I guess that we are through.
If you can’t like me like I am when your friends are near…
Maybe when I am gone the truth will be clear.

~*Who Cares?*~
this is not very good but i did it at least..

#8 Our Roses

From the first day we met
Our tiny seed of love was planted
Night and day it slowly grew
So stunning we thought it was enchanted..

It never lost a silky petal
And the sharp thorns never hurt
The emerald green stalk grew
Absorbing all love from the dirt..

Then one hot sunny day
The ruby rose quickly woke
Bees kissed their way into the flower
And the relationship quickly broke..

Apologies were cried but were too late
The once scarlet petals started to die
Loosing their once striking colour
And forcing them to say goodbye..

~ those were really good!! now if we can just get those others in we can judge judge judge!!!!!

--This is my first attempt at a title contest, but I tried my best--

A Blue Clear Sky
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A blue clear sky,
On a gentle day,
You'd never think,
The rain would come our way.

A drop of rain,
A touch of breeze,
You'd never think,
It'd shutter the leaves.

Thunder growls,
A presumptuous strorm,
This is where,
The lord was born.

The clear blue sky,
Is gone today,
Taken by storm,
Where the remain now lays.

xDarkSuicidex

I know I won't win, but I did want to try. =)

~ that was really good too!! all of these have been. someone needs to snatch up Too Good Is True, and we need to get those reserved ones in and we'll be done!!!!!

If I was aloud to do two, I would... I didn't see that one or I would have done it in the first place. =(

xDarkSuicidex

~ tell you what...since it was never a rule whether or not you could do 2, I'll go ahead and let you take that one too, since it's the only one left. So, you can do it if you want..but if not thats okay too..... ;)

Wow, thanks.. Now I'm writing it right now, but I'm not going to promise it's going to be good... Telling me what to write about is kind of hard for me because I'm used to the poem's just coming to me.. But I'm going to try, just for you. ^.^

xDarkSuicidex

Alright, Here's my attempt:

Too Good Is True {Ottava Rima}
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I gazed into your gorgeous touching eyes,
And I realized from the very first day,
That too good is true couldn't be a lie.
You told me you'd give me a sunshine ray,
Sparkling and gleaming you certainly tried,
And told you instead you could have me your way.
So gently take my hand a pull me close,
Kiss me on the lips and say you love me most.

xDarkSuicidex

~ ok...so I'm gonna give the remaining three people till sometime tommorrow..closer to mid-day....to get your poems in. If they aren't on here then it's totally possible that it will be taken by someone else.... so sorry!! Get 'em in, that way we can hurry this process and get the judging over with!!! Good Luck!!

~ sorry, SaveAnEgg.., but DreadingTime has already reserved Run To Me, and since I said that I would give them until sometime mid-day tommorrow, I will wait and see if DreadingTime is going to write their poem and put it on here, but if not I would be happy to accept yours instead!! :)

~ oh!!! thats okay. so now we're waiting on what....two more!!!!

are you gonna judge soon?

~ soon as someone doe's that last one....

~ okay...I just need someone to do "No More Sad Songs", so that I can judge this thing. Anyone who wants it can have it...i'll take the 1st one that comes in...

ill do it...but i already did 1...

No More Sad Songs

I’m sick of the sad songs, so this is the end,
Because of all of them remind me of you, my friend.
They sing of sadness, loss, and despair,
But I bet none of their sadness can compare-

To mine. I lost you, so the songs end here,
I must get through this, though I have fear.
I must be strong, not give take my final breath,
I just must hold on and not give in to death.

Sing no more sad songs, I don’t want to think of you,
You were my friend but you left, so “ado”.
The sad songs will end tonight, but I will not,
I won’t give in until I’ve fought.

I love you, but the songs are done,
Because you ended the love and fun.

yayy! all done :)

~ YAAAAAYYY!!!!!!!!! All Done!!! Time to judge!! Here it goes:

1st place--Our Roses by Jessy
2nd place--I Will Carry You by Wings of An Angel
3rd place--My Beautiful by Tara-Kay

Blue Clear Sky-- Dark Suicide
Like I Am-- Who Cares
Run To Me--SaveAnEggCrackASmile
No More Sad Songs--Who Cares
Too Good Is True--Dark Suicide

Congratulations to all!!!!!!! They were all REALLY good, so it was hard to judge...they all should be winners, but the truth is I don't have time to reward everyone!! Good job guys...

haha i knew i wouldnt place kinda sad when i wrote 2:P o well congrats winners:)

yayy! thank youuu! good job everyonnee! :)

wow, thankies. I am so grateful for this, i really did enjoy writing this poem and i am glad i did well
xxxx

~ you all are very welcome!!