Kids poems

  • goddess-glamourpuss
    19 years ago

    I have 3 poems that I wrote especially for children (specifically mine) but as they think they are brilliant (power of chocolate lol) I would appreciate honest critique.

    **THOSE PEOPLE THAT DON'T LIKE CHILDISH POEMS PLEASE DON'T BOTHER TO READ AS I DON'T WANT TO BE UNFAIRLY DOWN VOTED**

    All comments are 2 for 1
    Thanx