Photo in a plastic frame

heya
i would like some comments on my poem "photo in a plastic frame".
I feel i am lacking in the qaulity of my poems, and this one isnt my best, but i would like honest comments so i can improve
xxxxx
love Tara-Kay

anyone willing to comment? I will return the favour asap

Done. =)

..If you could just comment and rate "I Need To Cry" That would be appreciated.

Sure i would vote/comment on ur poem now! if you can vote/comment on my latest poem too... i would like honest coments too :D

Hi Tara,
I rated and commented on your poem!

Can you please read any of my featured and vote as well?