Comments please

Hi I would like comments on any of the following poems "When Hope Died", Steps to Nothingness,My Innoscence, Porcelain Doll, Alone, Sadness. it would be greatly appreciated. I will vote and rate yours alos if you do the same for me. Thanks to all who wrote constructive critism. Happy writing, Loretta

I will r/r/c as much as i can Loretta!