Help!!!!!!!!!!!

The sun fades in my head,
Gold and russet thoughts.
Evening's tide rushes,
A lunar focus of ebbing warmth.

That's my interpretation done!

woah nice one ed you are really a great poet

wow that was really good im not even going to try and beat that lol xx use that tanya xxx alex xxx

Come on give her some more ideas

She needs more ideas than that guys

The moon glows in my heart
I just feel I wanted to burst
When the sun shines
I feel hot like a ball of fire

The stars light up my sky,
representing my feelings
i wish on the most beutiful star,
To help me find some meaning.

lol crap i know but you asked for ideas lol

xxx alex xxx

The moon glows in my heart
I just feel I want to burst

When the sun shines into my mind
A hot ball of fire rolls about my thoughts

The stars radiate though my soul
And kiss the smile upon my lips

my heart, my my mind, my soul
They all tumble through the universe

a universe of hate verse love
and with shades of gray

The moon, the sun, the stars
all my guidance through out the seas

.. and im not sure what the last verse should be...

haha crappy.. but an idea

~Terra

haha i may have gotten a little carried away :$....

but yea that sounds good... but instead of crashes used clashes. lol.. ima nut

The moon glows in my heart
I just feel I wanted to burst
When the sun shines
I feel hot like a ball of fire

My emotions like a river
The warmth flowing threw me
I want to burst
yet i cant

The sensation is more then i could imagine
The sound of birds in my ears
Its all to much
Yet i cant stop taking it in

Its the way I feel
Just to breathe is getting harder
The sun
the river
the sensation!

ed's ending was awesome....so passionate!

For a title im not sure i just write the poems and my friends pick titles. and what do you mean by im just going to use your papers? im j/w

Passion blooms
Within my tempted soul...
Life is brushing lips with destiny,
The setting sun completes the cycle.
As I walk ,
Back facing the setting moon,
Toward the glowing horizon.

I don't know....just something I thought of...haha.

Oh ok. well thnx. um a name is hard to think of ill ask my friends though.

so did you need the ideas?