Lily!!

  • swill
    19 years ago

    hey guys, i wrote a friendship poem for that girl...and she started crying when she read it...she really loved it a lot. now we're awesome friends and i'm so glad...it never got one bit awkward...(but thats just because she was so sweet)...infact we're closer to each other now than ever before...and it feels really peaceful...

    its funny how things get so wrong that they cant get any wrong-er, and then they straighten themselves out...it always happens... :)

    Anyway, if anyone wants to read my poem, its "lily"...thanks...i'd appreciate feedback...

  • Kevin
    19 years ago

    Hey man, it's lovely you have written a nice poem about your friend, but this isn't the forum for poetry reading requests, which is all this thread is, so I'm going to move it to the relevant forum ok.

  • swill
    19 years ago

    oh sorry ...wont happen again

  • swill
    19 years ago

    PLEASE READ MY POEM LILY WILLYA...i'll do any poem you tell me to...leave the name(s) thanx