[Time] Will comment two in return

I'm looking for absolute honest comments on this poem. If you're not willing to give that then please don't bother posting. Not to be mean or to sound me. I would rather have a comment that can help me improve or to point out how the poem made the reader feel then one that said good job etc. I'll comment two poems in return, real comments as I expect from whoever posts. So if we have a deal then post two poem titles below. Also, I'll rate your poems if you rate mine.

Okay I'll count that

done =) i loved it!!! if you could just do my latest ones that would be great ^^

xoxo Lucy