New poem needing readers...

I've just written a new poem called "The Taboo Master." I'd really appriciate it if someone could take a look at it because it is somewhat different to my normal work and i'm quite pleased with the out come. It's one of those poem where it could have many meanings. I will of course return the favor.

Thanks.

Silver

anyone?

OOOOkkk well if anyone wants to read that feel free, but i have a new one now called "Torn Masquerade" so if anyone could read this i would be so grateful, and i will return the favor as always.

Silver

I READ IT...could not make any head nor nail off it...but anyways i love the lines ----

The child lies in a morgue pretending to sleep,
Whilst the mother sings a broken lullaby,
Like the moon hiding behind the winter clouds,
The feeble mourning hides a hollow goodbye.

Thanks you two for reading.
I have 2 more poems called "Sweet Dreams" and "Mistaken Equinox" which i would really appreciate someone reading. I don't feel they are my best, but i would still like the critique.
I will return the favor.

Thanks

BTW if anyone can make sense out of them especially "Mistaken Equinox" please tell me because although i do understand but can't explain them, no one seem to get them. Thanks.