Cherry Stone...Comments Returned!

Please comment honestly on my poem "Cherry Stone" and I'll return the favour on one of yours, just leave the title below.

Silver J

"Time" It's my newest though I was supposed to be on a poetry break. Please be extra honest.

Thanks for the lovely comment Kaylee.
I've commented honestly, as you asked, on your poem "Time."

Anyone else?

Thanks Silver. The message to th epoem is the title itself: Each description is something often missed or another display ot time passing with the second line being an example of the first thing.

Could you please check out Love Masquerade? thanks and i'll check out yours!