HELP ME PLEASE!

I have a poem on here that I neec advie on... its called "No Clue..." and I'd really appreciate it if you could read it... It's about my friend that smokes and I try to get her to stop, but she won't, or she can't... She claims she didn't want this to happen, but she let it happen anyways... If you could e-mail me at: HisBbyGrl4Lif945@aol.com and give me ANY ADVICE I would be so happy... Thanks! *~Nikki~*

PS: I'd also be really happy if you commented or even just rated my featured poems... I work really hard on them... Especially the ones for my boyfriend...