Please rate 1 poem its a good cause

Hi there,
If you read my poems you will know im not a poet of any sort, but the other day i was involved in a bet in which i had to post a poem on a site it could be viewed by others, so with that done, i continued to bragg to the bet-setter. But it didnt end there now as a matter of interest we want to see what you all think!
Please help me out by rating it!
Its called now your gone, but im still here
Many thanks
Pete
(its not just a flash in the old pan though since then i have wrote two more poems and survived)In return will happily read/rate/comment some of your poems.

There you go, I did one! Could you please have a look at my latest? Thankss.

I did one. I only ask that you read 'Gone Away'