New Poem..plz read and comment!!

Hey everyone! I just wrote a new poem..well actually a song..So plz check it out and tell me what you think..I will gladly return the favor!! Thank you soo much! Its called "Hold my Hand"

I checked it out for you. Interesting song. What instrument did you imagine accompanying it, guitar, piano? Just curious. I've tried writing a few songs myself, I have one called Shards which deals with similar aspects of the mind, but I wrote it more as a poem for in here.

done! can you do this poem.. thx!

Made in Tears

~angel~

okie dokie, could u plz do "this is the end"? cheers, mate xox