New Poem: "At Her Funeral" 2 for 1

Hey everyone,

I was reading the newspaper today, and one story caught my attention. I wrote a poem about it called "At Her Funeral". I wrote it in dedication to JonBenet, who was murdered a decade ago, and only now was the murderer found.

Please read, rate and comment on it, and I will return the favour for 2 of your poems.

i did it dariennnnn yay you have a new one... =D you made me cry Lol..but tis okay. i lovedddd it! great great job.

you dont have to do any more of mine since you did my new four already. unless you want, that's up to you! =)

Lol, thanks Nelle :P

Sorry I made you cry :(
Don't worry, I'll write a happy poems soon!..

Yeah, I read that article too. It makes me mad how people will do that kind of thing.

Please rate

-Breakage point
and any other you want

I'll read it now. Can you read 'Mirror Mirror' and 'Gone Away'? Thanks!

that was an amazing poem!! and im done commenting on it :D

Awesome!.. I will get to returning the favours tomorrow at work. I never have time on the weekends .. sorry.. but hope you guys can wait!

Ryan and jane

Beast Of White.

im a goin

kk, i'll do urs now. could u please do "your day of restribution" and "this is the end" it woudl meana lot. thanku.

Noni!!! Breezy!!! I did two for both of you!!

Reiko, I couldnt do the love poem, so I did another one instead. Those are always blocked for me at work. Sorry..

Thanks Steph, I'm done.

Two good poems, but I just can't stand people who do stuff like that to themselves.

Kiefer, I did 2 for you. Good stuff, you just need to edit your work before you post.

Time to take a little break..

Wings of Flame.. I'm done.. wow
you had a really sad one there..

Lady, I did your two poems..

Thanks everyone..
is there anyone else who would like to read?

Solitaire
Blessed Water

Thanks Kaylee :)

Done!..

Anyone else?..
Also.. I have a new one if anyone wanted to read..