Intensity

  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    [CLOSED]

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Whew!.. its been a while since I was the first to comment on a poem of yours.. lol

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Haha! Thanks Darien.

    And what's Personifaction{sp?} lol..

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Crinkled up [sheets erasing] tears,
    [Courage leaps] towards her faith,
    [Broken bones repair] with words,

    Actions given to objects that are not alive.

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. I get it now!!!

    Omg! I feel really smart. I did all that without even knowing it. Lol..

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?..

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Psst.. got a new one for you to read ;)

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    I just read it. but I havn't comment it yet lol.

    Cause I did go to sleep. but I can't sleep. So now I'm like.. half asleep? Lmao.

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  • David Paul
    19 years ago

    there you go... HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! :D...

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Darien, done.

    Kilman.. What was with your comment. =/ and may I ask why you rated it so low?

    ..And it's not my birthday.

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    aww.. sorry I keep forgetting about your poem!!! gahhh.. lol I am so tired.. I cant think..

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Lol.. It's alright!!

    I'm tired, too. And now I'm p'd off. Which isn't good when I'm tired.

    But it's not because of the poem, lmao.

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Eh, I'm going to sleep.

    I can't stay awake.

    Kilman: Learn how to critique properly without referring to the Pope, and then I might take a look at your work.

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Anyone else?

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  • Darien
    19 years ago

    Come on people!! Read it!!.. It's a good poem!

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  • Natalie
    19 years ago

    Yeah I agree.

    Geez, give the poor girl a channnnnnnnnnnnnce. lmao.

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