I never knew my dad

I never knew my dad cause he shot himself after i was adopted he was going to go to jail. i would to know if anyone can help me with writing a poem about this? i also haven't seen my mom since i was 7 and i am now 16.

well when you start writing the poem just write what you think and feel and it will turn out good i am sure and i am sorry about what happend i hope life gets better for you

you want to see your mom?..why don't you ask your gaurdain who adopts you..for help?..i'm sure they'll be willing to..well not 100% sure..but one day you'll know about your mother..i guess..

and i feel sorry for you..i hope your life get's better..!!...

You cant just write what you feel and it will get a 5 rating, it has to sound fancy and rhyme, rhyming is alwasy good, so it should really say.

"Just write down what you feel, but make it look really classy, in a special format, with some alternating caps, and some signs and make bloody sure it rhymes, THEN people will appreciate it"

THank you for responding and i have met my mom i just haven't seen her since i was 7

I really would love to write about this but i have a hard time getting starting. does anyone have any tips to help me?

inspiration needed, pplz!!

well, how about something like, "mom, dad, i wish i could see you, so many years i never knew you and i want you back in my life..." ?