new poem plz red and comment!!!!*****

- Name : *Wishes do come true*
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*Wishes do come true*
19 years ago

Comment on my new poems plz
ill comment on urz!!!

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- Name : Kaylee
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Kaylee
19 years ago

First you should use the word please instead of plz and yours instead of urz. Netspeak really isn't attractive when trying to hook potential readers.

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- Name : *Wishes do come true*
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*Wishes do come true*
19 years ago

thanks for the advice but first of all you should say it NICELY!!!!!

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- Name : Kaylee
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Kaylee
19 years ago

Sorry I ment to say that it was friendly advice but I had to rush to do something and forgot to. I looked at your poem as well and might comment on it.

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- Name : *Wishes do come true*
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*Wishes do come true*
19 years ago

oh ok thanks and i took your advise!!! please comment and ill comment on your poems..

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- Name : master of shadow
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master of shadow
19 years ago

I will have a look and comment

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- Name : *Isolde*
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*Isolde*
19 years ago

I will to.

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