1st 10 people to reply.......

The 1st 10 people to answer this and comment on one of my poems will have the favour returned plus an extra vote on a different poem for being so kind to me.

E.g: If you read one poem of mine and post your name here, I will go and read one of yours, comment on it and vote it. Then I will select the next poem underneath it and vote for that as a bonus for your generosity. if you read 2 then i'll comment for 2 and vote for 3. Get me? Just leave your names here and tell me if theres any specific poems you'd like read. If not I will randomly select poems that appeal to me.

I'm doing this because my recent poems need more feedback and are a little neglected. Please help me - much love and Thankyou :D

ok, just pick any

Jess - I commented and voted on 2. I also voted on ''Her tears'' Oceansoul - I commented and voted on your latest one and voted ''Flowers'' They were all great poems, carry on with the talent you both show.... Thankyou so much for reading and commenting on my work. Muchly appreciated :D

Anyone else? I'm on a roll! lol :D

I did one. :] ...Could you please do "Tainted Reflection" ..Thanks, hun! xx.

If you keep this open, or a spot reserved for me, I'll do this when I get home from school. >.<

I'll do like five if you keep it open. =]

xDarkSuicidex

Yeh xDarksuicidex It's still open for you :D - Taleee - commented and voted the poem, also voted ''under pressure''

6 more spaces left :D

Yeh I'll do it , I really need to socialise more on this site :)
Scarlet Tears
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My only poem please and vote as well

Read and commented on one of yours. Try my poem Rigour, please.

No need to vote though, I'm not concerned with numbers.

I've read and commented on three of your poems now and in your angels poem I've set you a challenge. I hope you can live up to my expectations!

Bret

Scarlet tears i've done your newest one and also voted on ''winter'' Road and the radio - yours is done and voted too. Bret, doing your poem now. Which other 2 would you like me to read? Ceasebeauty - yours are next......

Your choice!

All done :) bret - your poems are great and your talent is outstanding. keep it up and keep dishing out your good advice! :)

8 people, just 2 more now. I may reopen it after if I have some more spare time. Thankyou so much for all of your kindness :)

Thanks for the replies. I look forward to seeing what you do with the poems.

I would suggest posting them again as "Title (re-written)" so that you and others can compare what you have done and discuss how it has affected the piece positively and negatively.

Alright, I did 5 of yours...((If you want me to do more, don't hesitate to ask - I like your poems. Just comment back on mine as well =]))

Could you please ((and thank you)) Do:

-Love {Palindrome}
-Always {Septolet}
-Beneath The Broken Battered Midnight Sea {Double Ottava Rima}
-Falling Angels
-I Am
-The Demons Feed
-The Dreamer
-The Sun's Failing Doom
-Feeling What They May
-This Is Where

*They're all pretty short, so don't fear.

((Sorry, these are out of order....Please, enjoy.))

xDarkSuicidex

((And thank you for waiting on me...Hope you like the comments.))

I'll do the ones I can do. I'll definately get five done as promised. Right commented and voted on 5. I'll check some more out when I have a little time. Also voted on ''love''. Very good work. I can't comment on love poems for some reason :)