Double Comments!

sure i'll give you honest critique.
~poems~

* 'Ryan and jane'
* 'friend or foe?'
* 'priceless'
* ' for you my dear'
* "the 'killer'"

thanks
~Wings

There you go sweetheart, will you do my latest two for me please? Thankss. xx

i'll give critique if i have some.. but i'm not very good at it. Could you please comment my latest one.. Crimson Rose.. its not my best but yeah.. i'd like to see if it's alright. Or any of them that you want to. Much apreciated. Thanks =]