Broken Image

That is my new poem. I would greatly appreciate honest criticism on it. if you r/r/c i'll do yours in return. leave the title or I won't do it. and don't leave one liners b/c I also won't do it. AND if your going to downvote my poem. tell me why don't just do it out of spite. kk thanks!

--Oh and if i owe you comments from my other poem let me know b/c i dont remember! thanks

There you go sweetie! Could you please do my latest? Thankss, Ily hun. xx

ok ill take a look. if you could please comment and read "hear my call"

ok ill comment and read now....plz do mine
"the struggle"

Jessy babe i did yours. and ilu2 sweets!!

The rest of you I will do yours soon. I just can't right now! but thanks

Anyone else?

Okay. I'm so sorry it took so long. But I finally did both of yours. They were amazing.

Anyone else?