NEW TECHNIQUE CONTEST

This is very difficult but this is my attempt. It's not as good as the example but its mine so here goes

...............If
............You could
.........Sing me sleep
.......What would we dream?
And when would we ever have need to wake?

Pure Crystals

.........................Snow
.........................Falling
....................Pure crystals
..................Sparkling in light
Slowly preyed upon as the bright sun wakes

When I see you
By: Italian Stallion

......................When
......................I see
.................You at night
...............Upon the stars
I just want you to be mine forever

© Copyright 2006 By: Italian Stallion

-----------------Screams
-----------------Surround
----------------My sick life
-------------That is filled with
--Every tortured emotion that i've felt.
-All because of your sick inhumane lies.
---------------i've forgotten
---------------what real life
--------------------truly
---------------------Is

hope you likes it, another 5 second written poem. lol.. but it did have inspiration- my pounding headache from when my whole family was screaming and yelling whilst i was writing one about fire.. so i decided to change it. =D

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Heal
black soul
From fire
Erupting deep
Inside my cores of encaged misery
Free my mind from overbearing burdens
Give me my wings
Fly away
In dreams
peace

I want to try this one!!
Ill make mine in a minute =)

When
Will the
Longing stop
When you kiss me
That's when I wake up from my dream with tears
To realize that you are gone from me
Torn from me once
More like a
Whisper
Not
Yet meant
To be mine
Forbidden lips
Their heaven discarded as I awake

..first attempt :-S

//T.L.//

...................Sun
.............shines bright
.............smiling down,
............a gentle breeze
..when we are together, life is perfect.
A beautiful sunset, the stars come out
..........Your hand in mine
..............Sipping wine,
.................moonlit
...................night.
....................sky
..................opens,
............rain falls down,
............we don't notice
we have each other, everythings perfect.
..Embracing each other, no better place
...........my heart is Yours.
................Forever,
................You and
.....................I

........................All
...................the world
...................to see us
...............with happiness
...that will last for eternity for sure!
Perfect would be you and me together
...............sharing our life
...............with such love,
...................passion,
.....................hope!
......................You
....................are the
.................special one
................always in my
heart and soul now always and forever!

-Clouds Of Lies.-

.................Clouds..........
.................Roll on.........
.........Through my eyes........
...........Of sky to yours...........
As I believe every lie you told me.

© Jenna Elphick
September 5, 2006

**I don't know if this is right, this is my first attempt, but let me know if i did it wrong and i will try again. =) **

I
don't know
if I am
doing this right at
all but I thought I would try to do it.

Awe man, totally didn't notice that, i will fix it in a second. =)

Did it. Thank you for the correction, I am flattered that you took the time to read it :-)

//T.L.//

I wanna do oneeeeeeee.

Tears {Tetractys}

.............................Tears,
............................Tainted,
..........................Cascading,
....................Down my pale face,
........Revealing many hidden confessions.

7th September 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.

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A Tetracty is composed of 5 lines with a syllable
count of 1,2,3,4,10. u can make double Tetractys
by a syllable count of 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1. or a
triple by 1,2,3,4,10,10,4,3,2,1,1,2,3,4,10. and so on...
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Ooops.. thanks. Have corrected it :]

yayyy.. thanks so very much.. that really means a lot to me :D well done everybody else too :D xx

Can you comment on my 3 newest poems...Thank you.

Congratulations to all the other winners...everyones was great.

Thankies.. i really didnt think id win this one, actually to tell the truth id forgotten about it. =P

but its cool i won.